Question 3: Creativity
“Imagination is
more important than knowledge.” (Albert Einstein). A genius of his time, Albert
Einstein, argues the importance of creativity and imagination. The public is
becoming less creative, especially children in America- from kindergarten
through sixth grade. This is due to how schools are set up to encourage trying
to get the highest letter grades and test scores. Creativity is the ability for
an individual to “create” or imagine new ideas and creations. Schools should teach
creative and independent thinking.
What is creativity? Many people talk about creativity and
the need for it, but may not really know what it is. Creativity is an abstract
concept. One can interpret creativity in many different ways. I believe creativity
is the ability for an individual to “create” or imagine new ideas and
creations.
The decline in creativity can be blamed on society and
the education system. Society wants kids to go to school and study. Afterwards,
society expects the graduates to get a job and help with the labor force that
pushes society forward. The education system
has much blame to accept too. The education system teaches students that there
are strict boundaries to learning. Also how the education system is set up,
students can’t think outside the box. They are forced to think inside the box
for the sake of high letter grades and high test scores. Schools should teach
students to think unconventionally and freely. Without doing so, students will
become less and less creative.
What is the solution to the problem? We can start by
teaching children at a young age that making mistakes is all part of the
learning experience. And instead of “traditional teaching” where the teacher
explains a concept and students write it down. The teacher should introduce the
concept and let the students think critically about. Afterwards, the teacher
and students should discuss the concept, throwing ideas back and forth. Also
starting at a young age, children should be exposed to a plethora of extra-
curricular activities. This way the children get a broader view showing them
that reading and writing aren’t the only source of learning.
The lack of creativity in younger kids is a crisis. The
future of America and the world are dependent on these kids. As time goes on,
the world will only face sophisticated and harder problems that might not have
an exact solution. If we teach children that education is not black and white but
shades of grey, they will be creative thinkers that can solve political, environmental,
and scientific problems that plague society today. Creativity is one of the
most necessary quality of a great leader. The solution to wars, famine, and
health care is thinking outside the box.
Very well organized and thought out essay. The Albert Eistein quote captures the readers attention and further intrigues them. Right away I could find your thesis, "Schools should teach creative and independant thinking." All five paragraphs all of which are very well structured flow and are cohesive. However, there are few sentences like in your last paragrapgh, "Creativity is one of the most neccessary qualities of being a great leader," that need further explanation.
ReplyDeleteThe essay can be better.But overall it was adequate. You can maybe have more quotes and evidence in your essay and your second paragraph and your introduction is very short. You have a tendency start most of your paragraphs with a question, I'm not debunking your essay but you can try to start it differently.
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